From our online questionnaire it was made vastly clear that the narrative was consider greatly confusing in terms of if the wife survived and what was actually going on. Therefore from this we considered a change in narrative which would allow our target audience to be able to watch the film and this would also help our team in filming but initially give continuity to the narrative and give more logical sense.
The Changes:
- Edward kills his wife and this is the reason she keeps returning with hints to indicate to him what he had done. This will be established throughout the film from Elizabeth leaving notes, hints and Edwards own flashbacks that all lead up to him remembering his vicious criminal act.
- Edward re-visits the crime scene where he lays down flowers to convey his emotional guilt and frustration over not being to remember how Elizabeth died. Certain parts of the outdoor church bring back flashbacks of the actual wedding scene, all leading up to him having his final flashback of what really had occurred.
As a group we are still curious to whether to leave it a mystery, to whether Edward did really kill his wife on their wedding day as this would create more intrigue for viewers overall cinematic experience.
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